ext_21588 ([identity profile] quirkies.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tea_and_ink 2007-06-11 04:25 am (UTC)

unlocked

*gahhhh*
it's gonna take me a while to recover higher cognitive functions.
ok, the transgenic love is way hot, and sweet and all happy-inducing.
also, excellent max pov. you do a great job of showing how conflicted she is, how irrationally she's behaving and how deeply in denial she likes to live. and it's all in a funny, vulnerable voice. you make her sympathetic and just more engaging than most writers do.
fabulous work!
followed dazedizzy's rec and NWP

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